Thank you for your inspiring feedback. I am always open to criticism to improve my skills. I appreciate your time and effort. As an inventor and coming from an academic background, I even embrace negative criticism, as documented in an article with my reasons. https://medium.com/sensible-biohacking-transhumanism/negative-criticism-df22f5fe90a5
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